A Suicide note.

-
As I had always said Life has been a sine wave and I had been in its  peaks(ups) and  crests(downs), during all times there were some special friends who always supported and were there for me.
But the best and most loyal company was always My Poetry!!
I am very sure many of you have written poems in your bad times, when you felt really bad about something and you had no one around to share your grief with. It is not necessary to be good at poetry and you wont even care about it. You may end up writing the dumbest poetry, but for that instance reading the poetry again and again gives you relief.
So this poem is dedicated to the bad times which we all have been through in some part of our life!!!




Comments

  1. Sushma HarishNovember 23, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    hey---humour with suicide note/
    btb keep your spirits up anirudh. I appreciate your positive nature and nice posts. good luck.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Prakruthi PoojaryNovember 23, 2011 at 8:25 AM

    again nice 1 :-)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Shetty AnirudhNovember 23, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    @sushma harish: next one will sure be a +ve one :)

    @prakriti:n thanks again...

    ReplyDelete
  4. NehaNovember 23, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    Of course, looking at back at ur bad times makes u feel strong n tells u not to be sad, the worst is yet to come!
    This poem really let's all our innermost feelings out making our heart feel light!
    But yes, never to attempt a suicide coz its a cowardice act and doesn't provide solution to any problem in our lives!
    REALLY NICE POEM!! :) :D

    ReplyDelete
  5. Shetty AnirudhNovember 24, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    @neha: thanks for reading and your insights on the poem....

    ReplyDelete
  6. Maun VisionNovember 25, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    Very touchy pennings. But poetry does happen in Too good times Too.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Shetty AnirudhNovember 25, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    @Maun Vision: agree but most of the times in bad times and solace...atleast thats the case wid me...

    ReplyDelete
  8. Enigmatic SoulNovember 29, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    I agree and relate so well because I have been writing both poetry and prose since a long time and spilling all the stress and frustration on paper (or the computer screen) is almost as effective as talking to your best friend. And surprisingly, my best works are the ones that are created in this way, haha. Weird, right?

    By the way, great poem. Keep it up.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Shetty AnirudhNovember 29, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    @Enigmatic Soul :thanks for agreeing bro, only a fellow poet can understand this...else all d folks around me tell me try writing more of inspiring and happy poems....

    ReplyDelete
  10. Pari AngelOctober 8, 2014 at 8:11 AM

    Comparing lyf Vd sine wave...seriously I nva thought dat physics can b compared 2 our lives until I was here....
    NYC comparison actually..and a gr8 poem too

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Shetty AnirudhOctober 8, 2014 at 8:31 AM

      Ya Sine wave :)

      Thanks for stopping by..
      Keep reading

      Delete
  11. Ajay PaiDecember 25, 2014 at 8:09 AM

    We do not wanna loose a budding talent !! So no suicide please :) Winks !!

    Bro Good one !!

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

A Short Poem Dedicated to Mumbai

-
Image
I had been away from this city for 6 years. Now I am back here...in Mumbai. Its Mumbai-Lost & Found for me.
So... This poem is what I have learnt about the city from recent experiences....
The city has many avatars to show and so much to write about, I am writing a short one covering some...


The rules are precise,
if you can understand.
This city has lot to offer
if you can withstand.
Built on dreams and hopes
Nothing mere coincidence.
So as to meet your destiny,
the city is full of expedience.
City of the daring heroes,
but not for the pompous.
Its is for the proud,
but not for the self-righteous.
Never challenge the city,
For then it won't have mercy
No extra deference it asks..
Just the required courtesy.
Everything here is a telltale,
noting obtuse nor dopey details.
Memories of millions it preserves,
from personal to historical trails.
Bollywood running through its veins,
CIty of catchphrase, dialogues and abuse.
Sometimes poetical & prosaic,
sometimes just the blatant tr…
Read more

Untold Explorations - DAY1 - Golden temple, Amritsar

-
Image
Untold Tales is bringing a trip filled with adventure and art Join us in this trip and be an explorer artist with us
We will explore Amritsar, kullu, Manali, dalhousie and Kasol
What do you get in this trip -
1- exploring all these places with like mind people
2- camping in Kasol
3- Performing and witnessing performances in all these places
4- River Rafting
5- Staying in all 4 star hotels
6- one night camp under the stars ------------------------------------------------------------------
So what you read above is the description of the trip I found through a school friend who is active in the spoken word community and...........why not!? We said
So we are on board!
On a 10 day trip! No no didn't quit my job, managed to get that many leaves...cool eh? 🤣
I have been trying to revive my blog for long now and this would be the perfect opportunity to, so while we are 15 mins away from Amritsar to start our Day1, I start writing while I enjoy the window view in Golden Temple Mail.


Hop…
Read more

Untold Explorations - DAY1 - Retreat ceremony, Attari Border

-
Image
So the next stop of Untold Tales which started with Golden temple, Amritsar
was Attari-Wagah border retreat ceremony.

As one of our fellow explorers Prathmesh said, We went from feeling highly spiritual to feeling passionately Patriotic in the very first day of our trip.

Beating Retreat ceremony consists of various activities and presentation by the BSF(Border security force) followed by a powerful parade by the soldiers and the coordinated lowering of both nation's flag.

While we were rushing in through the queue what we had in mind was what we had always seen in videos and tv, high towering soldiers with those fantail turbans kicking high in the air and marching strong.


It was both funny and shameful to see lighters, tobacco and bidi packets scattered around the queue. Mostly people who were carrying these things heard the announcements informing of all the things prohibited and chose to drop it there instead of finding a dustbin.



Once inside we rushed to find a sweet spot from…
Read more